One More Last Dance *revised*

Channel: One More Last Dance *revised*

One More Last Dance revised

May 30, 2003, 4:11 pm

Mmmiss Penelope, mmmay I have one mmmore dance?Says the plump and stuttering orderly.Beaming from ear to ear she rises up out of her chair,touching his arm as in olden days, delicately.Stepping onto...

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 30, 2003, 5:23 pm

Beautiful. Sorry, what else can i say except "really beautiful piece?"

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 30, 2003, 7:22 pm

*applauds*I *love* it! Really brought a smile for me Beautifully crafted and so tender."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs has always been dominant and...

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 31, 2003, 2:42 am

Very original, a super little read, BG

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 31, 2003, 1:23 pm

ah, beautifully crafted, ct ... this holds the magic and romanticism of days that seem long gone in today's world ... the swelling music ... two souls dancing, lost in their own world ... and a...

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 31, 2003, 2:04 pm

Excellent - a Avid Ballroom dancer I could relate to the pride of the Two showing off there prowess and re-living those more 'youthful days' by keeping that courtship magic alive. Delightful.

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

May 31, 2003, 4:29 pm

I could hear the music.....your words came alive on the page... Raven

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 8:55 pm

Thanks Lost,I'm glad you enjoyed it.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 8:57 pm

Thanks Valoe, I'm glad it was able to move you so much. it was a treat for me as well.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 8:59 pm

Thanks MD, I'm glad you liked it. I've revised it since you first read it.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 9:02 pm

Thanks JAML,I'm glad you liked it. Where's the ladies? It is as magical as some of my memories of sweet innocence. We didn't know what great memories we were creating.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 9:08 pm

Thanks I Powell,I'm glad you enjoyed it. Glad I didn't butcher it in your eyes, since I am not a ballroom dancer, but an old square dancer.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 1, 2003, 9:11 pm

Thanks Raven, I'm glad it came alive for you. I have revised it a little since you read it. Hopefully it is more vivid and flows even better now.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 2, 2003, 9:26 am

I missed the first version...but this is enchanting...the sense of charm and elegance of a world that seems to have faded into the background...and yet, somewhere, it still exists...and the passion...

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 2, 2003, 12:30 pm

Thanks Paul, I'm glad you enjoyed it. It really has devoped nicely.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 7, 2003, 8:50 pm

A bit of they past......genuine and touching and I can see it in my mind's eye......absolutely wonderful!GaladrielThis is my simple religion. There is no need for temples; no need for complicated...

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 9, 2003, 7:05 pm

Thank you Galadriel. I'm glad you enjoyed it.CT

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Re: One More Last Dance revised

June 9, 2003, 10:05 pm

*what a wonderful moment..filled with treasured memories*.......thank you kind sir for "One More Last Dance"....again Raven (dances off as if floating on air)

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